Notes on Emily Dickinson
Her Poems:
She had over 1000 brief lyrics
They are her "letter to the world"
They are records of life about her
They are records of tiny ecstasies
They are records of candid insights into her own states of consciousness
They are records on the timeless mysteries of love and death
Her Subject Matter:
God
Prayer
Salvation
Immortality
Damnation
Heaven
Hell
Nature
Love
Beauty
Fear / Anguish
Renunciation / Loss
Sickness / Starvation
Pain / Death
Her Themes:
A sense of loss.
The idea of Nature as both a threat and a source of joy and comfort.
The ecstasy and dangers of love.
The tension between faith and doubt.
A fascination with death. (Death is typically personified as a monarch, a lord, or a kindly but irresistible lover.)
Important Elements in Her Poetry:
Her diction (choice of words)
The balance of abstract (Latinate) and concrete (Anglo-Saxon) words
The use of paradox
The use of irony
The use of personification
The unusual metaphors
The unusual conceits
Her "moods" vary greatly -- melancholy to exuberance, grief to joy, leaden despair to spiritual intoxication.
Her Meters:
Common to Protestant Hymn Books
Hymn stanzas follow a common meter and form (e.g. four-line stanzas)
Hymn stanzas follow a traditional rhyme scheme (e.g. xaxa or aabccb)
Some say she "invented" a "free" form of England's most common poem, the hymn.
Her Rhymes:
About 40% of her rhymes are exact (true) rhymes -- sod/God, store/more (poem 49)
Near (slant, imperfect) rhyme with similar vowels -- run/come (poem 214), prose/doors (poem 657)
Consonantal rhyme -- tell/still (poem 165), peer/pare (poem 585)
Identical rhyme -- long/along (poem 324)
Visual rhyme -- one/stone (poem 303)
Suspended rhyme, having only similar final sounds -- house/place (poem 670), most/least (poem 670), away/civility (poem 712), chill/tulle (poem 712)
Her "Romanticism":
Her coyness
Her sentimentality
Some of her views of Nature -- harmonious relationships with Nature
Her tendency to look inwardly
Her tendency to look beyond the actual
Her "Violations" of Poetic Conventions (her realism):
Her rough, irregular rhythms
Her imperfect rhymes (off-rhyme, near-rhyme, slant-rhyme)
Faulty grammar
Faulty spelling
Faulty punctuation
Some readers of Dickinson's poetry have found it morbid and oppressive because of her emphasis on:
Fear and anguish
Renunciation and loss
Sickness and starvation
Pain and death
(Think about her use of such subjects to portray mankind's spiritual and emotional needs and to portray mankind's predicament in a world of anguish and mortality.)
Some Quotes:
"Her mind was charged with paradox, as though her vision, like the eyes of birds, was focused in opposite directions on the two worlds of material and immaterial values."
"Like Emerson, her preference for the intrinsic and the essential led her often to a gnomic concision of phrase." (Gnomic means "wise and pithy, full of aphorisms." An aphorism is a "short, pointed sentence expressing a wise or clever observation or a general truth.")
"[Her] artistry [was in the] modulation of simple meters."
"[She had a] delicate management of imperfect rhymes."
"[Her] images [were] kinesthetic" (meaning highly concentrated and intensely charged with feeling).
"The sense of limitation is her greatest spiritual strength."
Contrasting and Comparing Whitman and Dickinson:
Whitman |
Dickinson |
His Individualism was more Public. | Her Individualism was more Private. |
He had a sense of Expansiveness. | She had a sense of Limitation. |
In general, his approach to life was optimistic. | In general, her view of life was that it was difficult, painful, and filled with losses--or with gains that were temporary and costly. |
He was more Transcendental and found a delight in Nature. | She was more Calvinistic -- believing in "the inevitability of spiritual struggle" -- and had a sense of evil in Nature. However, there is also some Transcendentalism seen in her as well, a sense of delight in nature |
He rebelled against the poetic conventions of the times. | She also rebelled against the poetic conventions of the times. |
He saw physical, everyday things as symbols of spiritual things. | She also saw physical, everyday things as symbols of spiritual things. |
He was a forerunner of 20th-century poets. | She also was a forerunner of 20th-century poets. Her poetry of anguish and despair especially seems to anticipate the "confessional poetry" of poets like Sylvia Plath, Anne Sexton, and Robert Lowell. |
He almost always wrote "free verse." | She rarely wrote "free verse." However, some scholars admit her poetic practices shifted over her lifetime, that she departed from relatively strict adherence for formal poetic conventions. |
Some Questions:
1.) Which of the two poets seems to speak more to the 20th-21st centuries?
2.) Does she exhibit, like Whitman, a desire to create new poetic vocabularies, new modes of literary expression?