Introductions and
Conclusions for Profile Essays
The Beginning:
The opening or “lead” is especially important in a
profile. Because readers are unlikely to have any particular reason to read a
profile, the writer must arouse their curiosity and interest. The best
beginnings are surprising and specific; the worst are abstract.
- Should I open with a striking image or vivid scene?
- Should I begin with a statement of the central theme?
- Should I start with an intriguing epigraph?
- Do I have an amazing fact that would catch readers’
attention?
- Is there an anecdote that captures the essence of the
subject?
- Should I open with a question, perhaps one answered
in the essay?
- Do I have any dialogue that would serve as a good
beginning?
The Ending:
- Should I try to frame the essay by repeating an image
or phrase from the beginning or by completing an action begun earlier in the
profile?
- Would it be effective to end by restating the
interpretation?
- Should I end with a telling image, anecdote, or bit
of dialogue?