Composing
/ Drafting
“In the composing stage of the writing
process, your concern shifts from experimenting with ideas and gathering
information to expanding on your ideas and structuring them into effective,
coherent prose.”
"The stage in the writing process wherein
you put down your ideas in the form of connected sentences and paragraphs."
From the Research:
|
Prewriting |
Drafting |
Revising |
Editing |
Beginning College
Writers |
10% |
80% |
-- |
10% |
Professional
Writers |
50% |
10% |
20% |
20% |
A.)
Review
- Reviewing
your prewriting
- Reviewing
your thesis and outline
- Using
multiple windows (on the computer)
B.)
Draft
- Using writing rituals
- Avoiding writer’s block
- Return to prewriting if necessary -- for
review, for more idea generation
- Using the top-down method
- Using your preliminary thesis statement
- Using your preliminary outline
- Push through from
beginning to end
- Using the building-block technique
- Create a group of
building blocks (paragraphs) one at a time
- Create the skeleton, then
flesh it out
- Write the central blocks
first
- Add introduction and
conclusion later
- Work from easiest to
hardest
- Return to blocks later to
develop
- Using the bottom-up method
- First draft is tentative
/ exploratory
- Beginning without a
thesis statement
- Finding the thesis
statement as you write, or at the end, then
taking it back up to the top for the second
draft
C.) When to Paragraph
- Each time you move to a new idea to
support the thesis
- If the point is too long
- If the point needs emphasis
- For an extended example
D.) Ordering Supporting Detail into Body
Paragraphs
- Each body paragraph focuses on one aspect
of the thesis and develops that aspect with adequate and
relevant details and other support
- Each body paragraph has a topic sentence
- Each body paragraph will use one or more
patterns (or "modes") of development
E.) Supporting Details
- The points made to prove or explain the
topic sentence which, in turn, proves or explains the thesis
statement
- An essay's success or failure depends
upon them
- ADEQUATE DETAIL
- Back up every
generalization to prove or explain it to your
reader's satisfaction
- You cannot expect a
reader to accept what you say
- You must explain and/or
prove what you say
- "Show" and not just
"tell"
- Move from the general to
the specific
- RELEVANT DETAIL
- Must be clearly related
to the thesis
- TYPES OF DETAIL
- Facts
- Statistics
- Expert opinions
- Examples
- Case Studies
- Etc.
F.) Collaborate
- Working with a group
- Writing collaboratively
- Collaborating via network
G.) Be flexible about your writing process
- Plan ahead
- Leave enough time for problems that may
crop up